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Post by Sakura on Jul 26, 2007 3:23:07 GMT -5
Name: Spiralpaw l Spiralsnow
Gender: She-cat
Age: 6 Moons
Clan: FrostClan
Position: Apprentice
Description/Picture:
She is a Japanese Bobtail, resulting in her bobbed tail. A mix between longhaired and shorthaired, her pelt is basicly white with black splochs. The one on her back looks something like this when looked on from above: o^o She has a black tail, and in general is fairly small. The most interesting feature about her- the one that draws the toms in- are her dazzling eyes. A crystal silver blue and a neon yellow green.
Short Description A small white she-cat with black sploches and mis-matched eyes.
Personality: Unusally upbeat and way too hyper for her own good, and definately has her own reality. She enjoys screaming random things and stating the obvious. Her hobbies are ossly enough, skipping, singing, annoying other people and licking others on the head, do not ask why, no one knows. (Maybe she's a cannibal?). She's a bubbly chatterbox that can't and refuses to shut up.
Past: Spiralpaw lived as normal as a life as hippo would in the desert. She has always been the oddball, the type of apprentice that would go out to hunt and come back with a bear chasing after her. Not that she brought any bears home, but, you get my point. Anyways, Spiralpaw has had a good random, life since then.
Family: None
IC I already did this...
Codeword -Correct-
Other: She may look the most NORMALEST of my large arrangment of psychopathic cats, but it's all A LIE. She's really the most homocidal of them all. ;D
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Post by Dreamstar on Jul 26, 2007 13:01:11 GMT -5
The Appearance is good. In the Personality:Instead of "Unusually upbeat...." put, "Spiralpaw is unusually upbeat..." You need seven detailed sentences. Use Spellcheck!!!!! In the History:Seven detailed sentences... at LEAST!!! How was she raised... who was her mom, who was her dad?... siblings? Ho was she raised? In General:Use the acceptance form provided on this site. Use Spell-check Go here to get ideas on what to put in your bio: restless4.proboards84.com/index.cgi?board=scl&action=display&thread=1184621426
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